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| Copyright – Danny Bowman |
Wherever I look, I can see this green needle like things. I
come to the edge of the blanket & slowly stretch my feet so that I can touch
it. WOAH!!
They hurt—no they tickle!
I stole a look at Mommy; she is busy reading her book. It’s
a beautiful sunny day— and sunny day calls for picnic, Mommy says!
I have been here before, but this green needles under my
blanket has escaped my notice. I am crawling all over the blanket but I am
scared to step out.
It’s only grass—go on touch
it sweet heart!
This is written as part of the Friday Fictioneers Challenge – Write a one hundred word story that has a beginning, middle and end. Today’s prompt is the above picture.
Hope you enjoyed.
This is a lovely take on the prompt.
ReplyDeleteThank you so yarnspinnerr
DeleteNice story from the POV of a child.
ReplyDeleteI m so glad you liked it.
DeleteNamaste
This was adorable!
ReplyDeleteThanks a tonne thecrookedtrident
DeleteWhat a fabulous take on the story. I loved it. :-)
ReplyDeleteOh I'm so glad you liked it Sarah
DeleteDear Moushmi,
ReplyDeleteA rather unique take on the prompt. And a very sweet POV of a very young child. Nice.
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Shalom,
Rochelle
Dear Moushmi,
ReplyDeleteA rather unique take on the prompt. And a very sweet POV of a very young child. Nice.
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Shalom,
Rochelle
Dear Rochelle,
DeleteIm so glad you liked it.
Thank you
I can't wait to see some green grass again! Unique point of view.
ReplyDeletejanet
Come over to my place....we have some green backyard here.
DeleteThank you so much!
Oh yes.. grass can be scary... I think children should get more early exposure
ReplyDeleteYou are right Bjorn..the urban boys must get some early exposure.
DeleteLovely story of a mother and child experiencing nature as the child sees it. Well done.
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad you liked it. Thank you so much for appreciating.
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